I don’t know if it was just me being dumb, but I totally read these in the wrong order (like the whole top row, then bottom three. Didn’t get confused till the last panel).
Anyway, I like the red tint in these! You work so well with colour.
A good way to make unambiguous panels is to have less contrast between panels that are supposed to be read after another and more contrast between ones that aren’t.
I didn’t have a problem with the panel order… :\
Lucy is this your way of taking Helvetica under your wing. Helping him by getting him to help himself. Lucy. Lucy you are my favourite.
(Gosh can I just say this whole comic is one of my favourites. I read well over 100 and it is currently in my top ten <3)
NO HE GETS OFF ON ANGER
I don’t know if it was just me being dumb, but I totally read these in the wrong order (like the whole top row, then bottom three. Didn’t get confused till the last panel).
Anyway, I like the red tint in these! You work so well with colour.
Helvetica you’re totally a kid, don’t lie.
Lucy’s going to teach you how to keep readers interest- I mean be a detective.
aaaagghhh! love it, love it, love it! i love everything about this page! :D
I agree with Son, this panel layout is a mite confusing.
Dang, sorry about that! I was hoping it would be clear in the transitions from 5 to 6.
A good way to make unambiguous panels is to have less contrast between panels that are supposed to be read after another and more contrast between ones that aren’t.
I didn’t have a problem with the panel order… :\
Lucy is this your way of taking Helvetica under your wing. Helping him by getting him to help himself. Lucy. Lucy you are my favourite.
(Gosh can I just say this whole comic is one of my favourites. I read well over 100 and it is currently in my top ten <3)
This comic is beautiful! I love it so far :)
I admit I was extremely confused at first glance, but when I took a second look, the panels fell into the right pages. Beautiful work as always!
*right places
sorry XD
The last panel is so appropriate
Once you’ve imagined Vet with a high pitched squeaky angry kids voice when he yells, you wont forget. QQ
Wait, isn’t Lucy’s reflection in panel 4 backwards?
Please sell “Start at the beginning, like a real detective” shirts. I would wear them and only them forever.